It’s a long while since I blogged a puzzle by Ifor – in fact I’m not sure I ever have, despite his being a regular setter. Quite a long preamble this week:
All across answers must be changed by mistake into other words or phrases. In seven of these, symmetrically placed, this mistake is several times more serious; solvers will have to pick up the pieces to construct the three-word phrase to be written under the grid. Differently interpreted, this phrase explains the erroneous word-order in all down clues which must be corrected before solving. Numbers in brackets give the space available.
What is a “mistake” then, and how serious is serious? I’m recovering from hip replacement surgery at present, so had more time to spare than usual, though a tendency to drop off to sleep while “thinking deeply” did not help.
After cold-solving a few across clues, it became clear that, for the majority, the “mistake” amounted to removing the penultimate letter from the answer, leaving another valid word. The seven “more serious” mistakes were amended by removing two or more letters from the same position in the word, again to yield a valid word. The symmetrical placing referred to in the rubric meant that one of these must be 25A. Subsequently the others turned out to be 7A, 42A, 14A, 38A and 32A and 19A, which have been highlighted for information in the grid below.
The down answer word order amendment became obvious after only a few solutions. The last word in the clue had to be moved.
Once this was established it was simply a matter of working steadily through the clues, many of which seemed quite tricky, and there were some unusual words to cope with (MICHER, NYCTALOPS and NAGANA to mention but three).
The extra letters in 14A [JU] and 7A [MPIN] seemed to indicate that the word JUMPING might well figure in the phrase to be written below the grid. After much fruitless deliberation, I had the thought that JUMPING TO CONCLUSIONS seemed to fit both across and down features indicated in the rubric, and could also be construed as a MISTAKE. In the across clues we “jump” from a letter in the word to the “conclusion” in order to get the grid entry, in the down clues one word has “jumped” to the conclusion, or end of the clue.
As I only had three of the seven “more serious” answers at the time of this idea’s dawning, this did not help much immediately, but at least I had a lead. This led me, by reverse engineering, to SALLUST (I’m not good at Roman historians!), PEG TOP (a toy I’d never heard of), INSCONCE (for which I had INCAVE for a long time – also a Shakespearean word for to hide) and PANSY
Getting PEG TOP at 19A gave me a G to go with JUMPIN and I eventually sorted the letters out as follows:
Clue | Answer | Extra letters |
14A | GURJUN | JU |
7A | SWAMPING | MPIN |
19A | PEG TOP | G TO |
38A | INSCONCE | CONC |
42A | SALLUST | LUS |
25A | CHARIOT | IO |
32A | PANSY | NS |
So there it is. A good puzzle from Ifor which kept me occupied for many hours during my convalescence. A remarkable grid construction – all those words containing other words with letters deleted from the same place in the word. No enormous PDM, but great enjoyment in gradually sorting everything out for this blog.
Across |
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No. | Clue (definition) | Answer | Grid Entry | Wordplay |
1 | Need runs badly after smallest interval appropriate to use (9) | COMMANDEER | COMMANDER | COMMA (smallest interval) + [NEED R(uns)]* |
7 | Overwhelming gains with renegade having backed Prime Minister (4) | SWAMPING | SWAG | [GAINS W(ith)]* round PM reversed |
10 | Personal bully cutting one dead (7) | INTIMATE | INTIMAE | INTIMIDATE (bully) minus I (one) D(ead) |
12 | Clean out joint no longer in use (4) | ANCLE | ANCE | [CLEAN]* |
13 | Display of circumstances paying no heed to money or position (5) | CIRCUS | CIRCS | CIRCU(mstance)S minus STANCE (position) and M(oney) |
14 | Run with jug, stirring source of resin (4) | GURJUN | GURN | [RUN JUG]* |
15 | Measure originally meant to be from Paris (4) | METRE | METE | M(eant) + ÊTRE (French for to be) |
16 | Cloak every adult in big pants, year after year (8) | GALLABIYA | GALLABIA | ALL (every) + A(dult) in [BIG]* + Y(ear) + A (year) (pants is anagram indicator!) |
17 | Savour once freshly aroused (5) | RESENT | RESET | Almost a double definition: SENT is aroused, RE-SENT is freshly aroused |
18 | Extent of India being regularly cropped in this year (4) | BIGHA | BIGA | B(e)I(n)G + HA (hoc anno) |
19 | Sheep’s tail as an illustration of soft toy (3) | PEG TOP | PEP | (shee)P + EG (as an illustration) + TO (of) + P (soft) |
20 | Nothing hard in form, like a sheath (7) | OCHREATE | OCHREAE | O (nothing) + H(ard) in CREATE (form) |
23 | Money that can be plucked from thin air, apparently (4) | NAIRA | NAIA | Hidden in thiN AIR Apparently |
25 | Vehicle used in ceremony of Boston Tea Party? (5) | CHARIOT | CHART | Boston Tea Party was a CHA (tea) RIOT |
27 | Intense game ultimately ends in trouble (4) | DENSE | DENE | [(gam)E ENDS]* |
29 | Stars sleep around, accepting help with acting later (7) | PLEIADES | PLEIADS | [SLEEP]* round AID with the A(cting) moved one place to the right |
32 | Feeble chap abandoned payments, missing objective I set to finish (3) | PANSY | PAY | [PAY(me)N(t)S]* remove ME (objective I) and (se)T |
33 | Lover in spare room, devastated after losing dispute (4) | ROMEO | ROMO | [(spar)E ROOM]* [spar = dispute] |
34 | Introduce unconstrained artiness to design (5) | INSERT | INSET | [(a)RTINES(s)]* |
36 | Misused past year near the common people (8) | PEASANTRY | PEASANTY | [PAST Y(ear) NEAR]* |
37 | Expert opener putting name forward, wanting play to start (4) | ONE-ER | ONER | OPENER minus P(lay) with N(ame) moved forward one place |
38 | Will’s put safely away since changing round conclusion (4) | INSCONCE | INCE | Shakespearian word to hide: [SINCE]* round CON(clusion) |
39 | Incantation – part name, part from the East (5) | MANTRA | MANTA | Hidden reversed in eMAN TRAp |
40 | Piracy at sea not unknown as cause of evacuation (4) | PICRA | PICA | [PIRAC(y)]* |
41 | Colours in dead leaves impressing me as a subject (7) | INDIGOES | INDIGOS | IN + D(ead) + GOES (leaves) round I (me as subject) |
42 | Historian yearning after upper crust (4) | SALLUST | SALT | Roman historian: SAL (= sial – upper crust) + LUST (yearning) |
43 | Ineffectual sightseers maybe travelling to places after New York (9) | NYCTALOPES | NYCTALOPS | NY + [TO PLACES]* |
Down |
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No. | Clue (definition) [repositioned word] | Answer | Wordplay |
1 | Reconcile giving up learner itinerary to guide (8) | CICERONE | [RECONCI(l)E]* |
2 | Locked up in Alcatraz, over badly done (5, 2 words) | ON ICE | O(ver) + NICE (badly done – see Chambers) |
3 | Commune that’s stopped revolutionary pinching thief (6) | MICHER | CHE (revolutionary) in MIR (commune) |
4 | Disease beginning to grip banana, rotting after black going (6) | NAGANA | [(b)ANANA G(rip)]* |
5 | Each story checked by bishop previously (7) | EARLIER | EA(ch) + RR (bishop) round LIE (story) |
6 | Vagabond roll means to restrict children on a (8) | RUNAGATE | RUN (roll) + A + GATE (means to restrict children) |
7 | Accompaniment to curry lamb as rehashed (6) | SAMBAL | [LAMB AS]* |
8 | Cuckold husband at once, painful to a (7) | ACTAEON | A + [AT ONCE]* |
9 | Encourage dog to return, catching eye of Scottie (5, 2 words) | GEE UP | PUG reversed round EE (Scottish eye) |
11 | Hairstyle bobbed ridiculously cheaply (8) | TRASHILY | [HAIRSTYL(e)]* |
19 | Nice simple gain ignoring money one wasting (8) | PLEASING | [SI(m)PLE GA(i)N]* |
21 | Emergence of insects colonies spreading (8) | ECLOSION | [COLONIES]* |
22 | Amount of material that’s still in lounge service (8, 2 words) | REST MASS | REST (lounge) + MASS (service) |
24 | Shortage of CO2 stopping drinkers protecting desperate panic (7) | ACAPNIA | AA (stopping drinkers) round [PANIC]* |
26 | Like a man hoax beginning to laugh in some (7) |
HUMANLY | HUM (hoax) + ANY (some) round L(augh) |
28 | Mountain air void above a desert (6) | ARARAT | A(i)R (air void) + A + RAT (desert) |
30 | Ruined talent potential (6) | LATENT | [TALENT]* |
31 | Weaker players batting left to benefit only some (6, 2 words) |
IN TAIL | Double definition |
32 | Supporters prompt side to get behind professional (5) | PROPS | PRO(fessional) + PS (prompt side) |
35 | Bar finished some changes to public (5) | ESTOP | finished = archaic: hidden in changES TO Public |
All thanks to Ifor for a solidly good puzzle and Hihoba for the clear analysis. My first four across solutions were from the six whose single letter to be deleted was R, leading to a theory that “mistake” cryptically meant “not Right” and a temporary struggle with nonce-words like
ROMEO and OCHREATE. Also I was afraid the phrase would be some hideous anagram and didn’t even start to look for it until I had nearly all the “more serious” problem answers. It was generous of Ifor to make “picking up the pieces” so much easier than an IKEA flatpack.Shortly before getting to the end I was puzzled to find myself thinking of the children’s fantasy The Phantom Tollbooth, featuring an island to which characters involuntarily jump if they make a certain kind of mistake. The island is of course called Conclusions. Me and my subconscious …
Not too difficult this week, but thoroughly enjoyable. I got myself into a little pickle at the close, thinking we needed the letters from all across clues to construct the phrase, despite the clear preamble, but once I’d spotted the error of my ways, well, getting the phrase couldn’t have been easier.
I didn’t quite complete this one as, like Jon @2, I thought that all the omitted letters had to be used to construct the phrase. I had far too many letters to make anything conclusive. Sadly, unlike Jon @2 I didn’t spot the error of my ways and eventually had to give up. I enjoyed the puzzle despite not finishing. Thanks to Hihoba and Ifor.
I sympathise with Hihoba on the “thinking deeply” issue. I usually attempt the IQ in bed at night and my wife ironically admires my apparent ability to “read with my eyes shut”.
Firstly, thanks to Hihoba for the blog and we hope that your recovery goes well.
Secondly, thanks to Ifor for the puzzle. Like Jon, we thought we had to use all the letters from the across clues but then realised that the three words were going to be very, very long.
Well I found this tough and slow going. But then it wasn’t until I was filling in almost my final answer (the obscure 17A) that it clicked it was always the penultimate letter that was dropped! This cleared up my frustrations with the ambiguity about NAIR/NAIA at 23A and a check in the dictionary confirmed the existence of ROMO rather than the confidently penned in ROME at 33A.
This revelation made me realise what an achievement the grid was, so hats off to Ifor for compiling an entire grid of across clues with an answer that remains a real word when the penultimate letter is removed (or rather, a grid comprised of words that remain real words when a letter is inserted in the in the penultimate position). Given that constraint, it is no surprise the removed letters don’t form anything, as I also was half thinking they might.
Thank you for your kind wishes, Bertandjoyce. Recovery seems to be progressing as expected. I confess, OPatrick that I also had ROME in 33A for some time and had to realise the pattern before choosing between NAIR and NAIA. A nice little bit of misdirection, I thought.
As always, my thanks to blogger and commenters. I think the matter of which pieces were to be used has been largely dealt with – I’d just add that the punctuation in the preamble was intended to indicate that just the “more serious mistakes” were to be picked up. Also, I suppose it’s inevitable that changing word-order in a clue will lead to differences in interpretation, but for what it’s worth 3d should read “pinching revolutionary” (so CHE in MIR) 8d “to husband (= surround ) a” and 31d parses as batting / in then weaker players / tail. I’d like to think that the ROMO/E and NAIA/R ambiguities were deliberately included, but in fact they were simply a consequence of the gridfill and only seen by me as a desirable extra afterwards.
And of course I’m pleased to note your reply to B&J – best wishes for further progress, and I hope the solve and blog served to ameliorate the aftermath of the operation.
Ifor
I do hope that Ifor pops back & reads this because I thought that the puzzle had a stunning grid construction yet again, and was most enjoyable. I twigged the Across answer/entry mods very quickly, but was slightly held up by the Down clue mods as the first ones I solved all had the word moving from second place to the end. And it was only when I had finally sorted out the first three “more serious mistakes”, namely MPIN, JU & GTO, that I myself could Jump to Conclusions and resolve the other four.
So, thanks also for the blog, and a slight ticking off to OPatrick @5 for using “comprised of” – as noted in Chambers, “comprise vt to contain, include; to comprehend; to consist of (often, incorrectly, with of).”
I’m certainly somethinged off! Feeling suitably chastened I started reading this, but soon lost the will to live. I did however skim through to this bit:
Overt defenses of “comprised of” are uncommon, but Harvard University psychology professor Steven Pinker considers its deprecation to be one of “a few fuss-budget decrees you can safely ignore”.
That’ll do me.
(But a genuine thank you for this interesting little aside.)
HG@8 – I have indeed “popped back” to thank you for your kind remarks. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
On a different theme, my hackles rise when I see IMPLY and INFER treated as interchangeable; I’m aggravated by the misuse of “aggravated”; and I deplore the erosion of meaning that’s rendered the useful phrase “begging the question” largely worthless. I’d better stop there, though.
Ifor