Chalicea is a fairly regular contributor to the Inquisitor series. I blogged her most recent one in January that focused on the SS Great Eastern and the transatlantic communications cable.
The preamble this week told us that ten thematic words must be removed from clues before solving. The initial letters of the words on each side, when read in clue order, will indicate to solvers how to fill the unclued central spaces creating a poetic Heaven.
I didn’t really understand the preamble initially, especially the bit about ‘each side’ which I took to mean the left and right sides of the grid.
In clues, using the extra words device, a few are usually quite obvious while some can only be reversed engineered when the endgame becomes more apparent. This was the case this week as I identified some redundant words in error. For a time I had more than ten. I had ‘New’ in 10 across, ‘smuggler’s’ in 19 across, ‘remembering’ in 34 across and ‘Coral’ in 2 down before everything fell into place. Writing the detail of the blog and dipping into Chambers helped eliminate the erroneous words. Also by this time, I had understood that ‘each side’ referred to words either side of the redundant one.
As can be seen from the detail below, the message spelled out was COMPLETE BLAKE’S VISION
The redundant words are all present in William Blake’s poem JERUSALEM as can be seen from my highlighting the text of the poem
A close look a the grid shows that the empty cells could be filled in way that ‘builded’ JERUSALEM in the centre row among rows 6 (THESE DARK) and 8 (SATANIC MILLS) as highlighted in lines 7 and 8 of the poem.
And did those feet in ancient time,Walk upon Englands mountains green:And was the holy Lamb of God,On Englands pleasant pastures seen!And did the Countenance Divine, Shine forth upon our clouded hills?And was Jerusalem builded here,Among these dark Satanic Mills?Bring me my Bow of burning gold;Bring me my Arrows of desireBring me my Spear: O clouds unfold!Bring me my Chariot of fire!I will not cease from Mental Fight,Nor shall my Sword sleep in my hand:Till we have built Jerusalem,In Englands green & pleasant Land.
Chalicea’s clues usually offer a couple of fairly obvious ways into the grid, so the grid fill progressed fairly smoothly although I didn’t identify the endgame till quite late on.
I was impressed by 1 across that managed to clue the element RIFFCL as a regular set of letters in a phrase. It took me a while to understand what role ‘New’ was playing in 10 across, but I reckon it’s an anagram indicator to relate BAs to the letters SBA in the word subalpine. There is no reference to smuggler’s in the definition for DARKY but I can see that a smuggler may be a frequent user of such a lamp. I looked upon remembering as an extra word in 34 across as I thought ‘not initially’ on it’s own eliminated the R from REGRETS.
HOSE at 17 across raised a smile.
AS ever, I learned a few new words and the trawl through Google when writing the blog ser me off down some interesting sidetracks to highlight the educational nature of crosswords.
The final grid looked like this. I have highlighted some cells to help illustrate the endgame. The highlighting is not necessary for submission.
The title HEAVEN, presumably relates to the Blake’s vision of JERUSALEM as a HEAVEN on earth.
Across | ||||
---|---|---|---|---|
No. |
Clue Amended Clue |
Words Letters |
Wordplay | Entry |
1 |
Scots court land officers regularly carry it off officially with endless perks when she’s around (13, 2 words) Scots court officers regularly carry it off officially with endless perks when she’s around (13, 2 words) |
Court … land Officers |
SHE’S containing (around) (RIFFCL [letters 3, 6, 9, 12, 15 and 18 {regularly} of CARRY IT OFF OFFICIALLY] + PERKS excluding the first and last letters P and S [endlessly]) SHE (RIFF CL ERK) S |
SHERIFF CLERKS (in Scotland, registrar of the SHERIFF‘s court, who have charge of the records of the court, organize its work, etc.) |
10 | New BAs eschewing fantastic subalpine route to city (6) |
Anagram of (fantastic) SUBALPINE excluding the letters SBA (an anagram [new] of BAs) in order within the word SUBALPINE UP-LINE* |
UP-LINE (in railway terminology, the line for upgoing trains (i.e. those going to, not from, e.g. a city)
|
|
11 | To prevail, score about average (6, 2 words) |
HIT (score, as in score a HIT with, or alternatively this may refer to injection of drugs, where both score and HIT can relate to the taking of hard drugs) containing (about) AVE (average) H (AVE) IT |
HAVE IT (prevail)
|
|
13 |
Minute divine piece in fine old-timer’s catalogue (8) Minute piece in fine old-timer’s catalogue (8) |
Minute … divine Piece |
F (fine) + RAGMENT (obsolete [old-timer’s] word for a catalogue) F RAGMENT |
FRAGMENT (small [minute] piece) |
15 | Have propulsion to carry daughter past with dust in hair (10) |
BE POWERED (have propulsion) containing (to carry) D (daughter) BE POW (D) ERED |
BEPOWDERED (archaic [past] term meaning POWDERED over [POWDER can be defined as to use POWDER for the hair. Chambers also gives an obsolete meaning of POWDER as dust) |
|
16 | Thoroughly searches Scrubs (6) |
SCOURS (searches thoroughly) SCOURS |
SCOURS (scrubs) double definition
|
|
17 | Santa repeats these, it’s said, when filling them? (4) |
HOSE (sounds like two HOs, reference Santa Clause going HO HO as he delivers his presents at Christmas) HOSE |
HOSE (Santa puts many of his presents in stockings or HOSE)
|
|
18 |
The northern letter, holy English character, from Hebrew (4) The northern letter, English character, from Hebrew (4) |
Letter … holy English |
T’ (North of England expression of ‘the’) + ETH (a letter a barred D, used in Old English without distinction from thorn for voiced or voiceless th;) I’m not sure I have parsed this right, as I don’t know exactly how the words English and character fare split between the wordplay and definition T ETH |
TETH (ninth letter of the Hebrew alphabet) |
19 | In Poldark you see this smuggler’s lantern (5) |
DARKY (hidden word in [in] POLDARK YOU) DARKY |
DARKY (DARK lantern, probably popular amongst smugglers) | |
21 | Conical cap resident of India rejected (3) |
JAT (member of a people inhabiting NW India and Pakistan) reversed (rejected) TAJ< |
TAJ (dervish’s tall conical cap) |
|
22 | Plant‘s occasionally mixed buds (3) |
MEU (letters 1, 4 and 7 [occasionally] of MIXED BUDS) MEU |
MEU (the plant baldmoney or spignel)
|
|
23 |
In Genesis a tantaliser ancient evil spirit (5) In Genesis a tantaliser evil spirit (5) |
Tantaliser … ancient Evil |
SATAN (hidden word in [in] GENESIS A TANTALIZER) SATAN |
SATAN (the chief evil spirit) |
26 | Misfortune taking first of tablets (4) |
PILLS (tablets) excluding (taking) the first letter (first of) P ILLS |
ILLS (misfortune) | |
27 | Bank is heartless indeed (4) |
REALLY (indeed) excluding the middle letters (heartless) AL RELY |
RELY (bank)
|
|
29 |
Surprisingly wasn’t a Bantu hills language (6) Surprisingly wasn’t a Bantu language (6) |
Bantu … hills Language |
Anagram of (surprisingly) WASN’T + A TSWAN* A |
TSWANA (language of an African people of the Bantu family, living mainly around Botswana). |
31 | Claim to strengthen concrete before it sets (10) |
PRETENSION (claim or aspiration) PRETENSION |
PRE-TENSION (stretch the reinforcing wires or rods in pre-stressed concrete)before the concrete is cast) double definition
|
|
32 | A child wrapped in fur related to part of the year (8) |
(A + SON [child]) contained in (wrapped in) SEAL (type of fur) SE (A SON) AL |
SEASONAL (relating to specific parts of the year)
|
|
33 |
This slip is applied clouded kaolin say, to china (e.g. bone possibly) (6) This slip is applied kaolin say, to china (e.g. bone possibly) (6) |
Applied … clouded Kaolin |
Anagram of (possibly) E.G. BONE ENGOBE* |
ENGOBE (slip [creamy paste of clay {kaolin is china clay} and water for coating, decorating and casting pottery] applied to ceramics before the glaze, eg to mask their natural colour.
|
34 | Feelings of loss, not initially remembering birds (6) |
REGRETS (feelings of loss) excluding the first letter (not initially) R EGRETS |
EGRETS (white herons of several species; birds)
|
|
35 | Little toes she forced into high, thin parts of shoes (13, 2 words) |
Anagram of (forced into) LITTLE TOES SHE STILETTO HEELS* |
STILETTO HEELS (high thin parts of a woman’s shoe) | |
Down | ||||
1 | Offspring we’re told, restrained birds – brilliant waders (11, 2 words) |
SUN (sounds like [we’re told] SON [offspring]) + BIT (restrained) + TERNS (birds) SUN BIT TERNS |
SUN BITTERNS (South American wading birds with brilliant many-coloured markings) |
|
2 | Coral snakes and the Spanish asp writhing (5) |
EL (Spanish for ‘the’) + an anagram of (writhing) ASP EL APS* |
ELAPS (American genus of snakes, also called Micrurus, the coral snake) |
|
3 | Skip bats right choice (7) |
Anagram of (bats) RT (right) and CHOICE RICOCHET* |
RICOCHET (skip along the ground)
|
|
4 | Separated anything from Yorkshire and Northern Ireland retrospectively (5, 2 words) |
(OWT [Yorkshire dialect term for ‘anything’) + NI (Northern Ireland) all reversed (retrospectively) (IN TWO)< |
IN TWO (separated)
|
|
5 | Difficult to burn eastern fir – it’s problematic (13) |
Anagram of (problematic) EASTERN FIR IT’S FIRE-RESISTANT* |
FIRE-RESISTANT (immune to the effects of fire up to a certain degree; difficult to burn) |
|
6 |
Cleans up, for example, burning substances resulting from scorching (5) Cleans up, for example, substances resulting from scorching (5) |
Example … burning Substances |
CHARS (does house cleaning) CHARS |
CHARS (substances resulting from scorching) double definition
|
7 | Rep mostly getting into the Burgundian bottle (6) |
AGENT (representative; rep) excluding the final letter (mostly) T contained in (getting in) LA (one of the French forms [Burgundian] for ‘the’) L (AGEN) A |
LAGENA (narrow-necked bottle used in antiquity) |
|
8 | Ruminant broke out, full of energy (6) |
Anagram of (out) BROKE containing (full of) E (energy) RE (E) BOK* |
REEBOK (South African antelope; example of a ruminant)
|
|
9 | Arsenic compound makes royals utter cry of pain (11) |
KINGS (royals) + YELL (utter; cry) + OW (an expression indicating pain) KINGS YELL OW |
KINGS-YELLOW (orpiment [arsenic trisulphide; arsenic compound] as a pigment. |
|
12 | Conveyance concerning liberal right to use someone’s land (11) |
RE (concerning) + L (liberal) + EASEMENT (a legal right attaching to a piece of land entitling its owner to exercise some right over adjacent land owned by another person) RE L EASEMENT |
RELEASEMENT (the giving up of a claim or conveyance) I’m not sure it’s the conveyance itself, but I’m not a lawyer.
|
|
14 |
His bust seen to represent the very pleasant item required (11, 2 words) His bust seen to represent the very item required (11, 2 words) |
Very … pleasant Item |
Anagram of (to represent) HIS BUST SEEN THE BUSINESS* |
THE BUSINESS (exactly what is required) |
20 | Stops out of date operation to provide further protection against risk (8) |
REINS (stops) + URE (obsolete [out-of-date] word for ‘operation’) REINS URE |
REINSURE (provide further protection against risk) | |
24 |
Shrubs seen in desert, a line heralded as godsent items originally (6) Shrubs in desert, a line heralded as godsent items originally (6) |
Shrubs … seen In |
ALHAGI (first letters of each of [originally] A LINE HERALDED AS GODSENT ITEMS) ALHAGI |
ALHAGI (papilionaceous manna-yielding genus of desert shrubs)
|
25 | I need O2 York (not half easy to look up) (6) |
(EBOR [EBORacum {York}] + EASY excluding the final two of four letters [not half] SY) all reversed (to look up; down clue) (AE ROBE)< |
AEROBE (an organism that requires free oxygen [O2] for respiration)
|
|
28 | Belief people should leave apartment building (5) |
TENEMENT (apartment building) excluding (should leave) MEN (people) TENET |
TENET (any opinion, principle or doctrine which a person holds or maintains as true; belief) |
|
29 |
Once built near a northern light without bounds (5) Once near a northern light without bounds (5) |
Once … built Near |
A + N (northern) + LIGHT excluding (without) the outer letters (bounds) L and T A N IGH |
ANIGH (archaic [old ] word for ‘near’) |
30 | Senior, endlessly genial, rises with energy (5) |
(GENIAL excluding the outside letters [endlessly] G and L) reversed (rises) + E (energy) AINE< E |
AINEE (elder or senior) |
Completing the grid and completing Blake’s vision took a lot less time than actually working out what thematic words had to be removed, and what the message actually was. 🙂 Still pretty straightforward overall, and thoroughly enjoyable. A nice change of pace.
As Jon says, thoroughly enjoyable.
I too found that some words to be removed were easier to identify than others, and that became an interesting and entertaining part of the solve. I got the completed phrase with two pairs of letters still to identify and had to go back to the clues to prove that they were indeed the correct letters.  I liked the theme very much, and the way it revealed itself – with the help of the phrase.
The wording of part of the preamble was indeed a bit puzzling, and I thought in the end that it wasn’t in order to put us off but just the result of striving to be too succinct. ‘on each side’ could easily have been written more clearly as ‘on each side of the removed word’. (The doubt arises because ‘words’ in the second sentence would at first be taken to refer to the ‘words’ in the first sentence.)
Thanks to duncanshiell and Chalicea.
Yes, a nice soothing solve after the long agony of the previous week! I always feel happier on the rare occasions when I don’t need to look anything up. Thanks all round.
The “words on each side” bit seemed clear enough to me.
I enjoyed this too, especially when I realised it wasn’t related to Blake’s 7 (or Blake’s VI, as I at that point had it). Surprising how many thematic words I got without noticing they were all from the poem. I think it fell into place very nicely. Thanks to Chalicea and duncanshiell.
AlanB @2. You definitely made the right choice by choosing to this one in preference to Ifor. A fairly gentle one from Chaicea, which I enjoyed. I agree that the “each side” bit in the preamble was confusing, but once the penny had dropped, things started to make sense very quickly.
BTW, Alan, I have added a belated comment further to yours two weeks ago which you may find helpful. See comment 16 for 27th June.
Thanks to Chalicea and Duncan.
Thanks Chalicea for a fine puzzle once again. Relatively straightforward, although I had some trouble identifying all of the extra words and for a while had COMPLETE ____’S VISION which was tantalising but missing the crucial element! I’d failed to notice that the extra words were all from the poem – nice touch.
Thanks to Duncan for the blog. It looks like there is a letter I missing in the grid at 5d.
DaveW @5
Thanks for going to that trouble. I went back to the blog of two weeks ago and read your comment – much appreciated.
Yes, I definitely made the right choice, although having completed this one in good time I went back to Ifor’s puzzle and had the sort of problems with it that I predicted – and more besides!
On the whole, though, I am enjoying these experiences and hope to report on no. 1550 next week.
Excellent puzzle with the emphasis on entertainment rather than difficulty for its own sake. Chalicea never fails to deliver the goods, and I’m delighted that we get her puzzles relatively frequently.
Was there any significance to the letters in the boxes reading SURE and CALM clockwise?
A bit on the easy side for me – I prefer something I can get my teeth into. But I appreciate that we need to cater for solvers with a range of experience, so that’s OK by me. Thanks to Chalicea & Duncan.
I’m surprised that nobody has yet mentioned the “these / those” options before “satanic mills”. Mrs T did this one solo while I grappled with the Listener puzzle and she originally went with “these”, but I was sure that when sung as a hymn, which is surely how most people encounter this poem, it is “those”. Call me old-fashioned (or a retired librarian), but rather than check online I looked at two authoritative printed sources, The BBC Hymn Book (1951) and The Penguin Book of Hymns (1989), and both give “those”, so we decided to amend our entry before posting. Since this thread began yesterday I have looked online and “these” crops up regularly. I have also found “these” in another book, JR Watson’s An Annotated Anthology of Hymns (OUP 2002), but unfortunately the annotations do not state whether this is the definitive version. Has anybody seen Blake’s manuscript? I wonder if both options will be allowed, but if “sure” and “calm” are significant it obviously has to be “these”.
Another excellent puzzle from Chalicea, who regularly proves that they don’t have to be difficult to be fun. The use of key words from the poem as the extra words in the clues was inspired.
Re #10, the ODQ has “these”.
Terrier @10
“The use of key words from the poem as the extra words in the clues was inspired.”
I agree totally and meant to mention it in my earlier comment @2.
Many thanks to all, and, of course, especially to Duncan. I am truly honoured by all those warm comments. For Ifor and me, there is a touch of comedy in the frequent solver comparison of his really tough ones and my relatively easy ones as we do, almost always, test the ones the other sets. Our crosswords also frequently appear close to each other in a time sense as the editors use our different levels of difficulty for a fine balance. He doesn’t do ‘easy’ and I can’t do ‘tough’ but we have invariably approved of the other’s before solvers comment.
The ‘these/those’ ambiguity almost caught me out. I had set the crossword with ‘those’ remembered from school hymn-singing but checked in the ODQ at the last minute and found ‘these’. The ODQ has let me down in the past (spelling of o’Keeffe where the ODQ lacks an F and my published crossword had the error) but it is, I believe, our official source with Chambers.
On the Wikipedia page for Blake’s hymn there is an image of Blake’s own manuscript, as used in the Preface to his book on Milton. The hazy image there links directly to a sharp image on its own Wiki page, from which you can see that ‘these’ is clearly written. If you accept this as Blake’s handiwork then ‘these’ is correct.
I found Chalicea’s comments illuminating. I cannot fail to have noticed how the reporting of these puzzles nearly always includes a comment on how ‘tough’ a puzzle was (or not), rather like the ‘time taken’ for a puzzle is reported by most contributors on the Times for the Times forum. I usually report only on the quality of my solving experience and (from my point of view) the quality of the puzzle – not usually on the level of challenge (although I’m sure I did so once on a puzzle by Schadenfeude).
I tackled the Ifor and the Chalicea within a week of each other, and they are recent enough for me to remember my experiences of them: the Ifor was tough and the Chalicea was not!
Super puzzle. Being able to build JERUSALEM among DARK SATANIC MILLS gave me big smile when I twigged what was going on. I am embarrassed to admit that I was another whole failed to spot the removed words were also from the poem. I feel I am letting the setter down in these cases, their effort gets wasted on me.
Thanks to all.