I hope I won’t be feeling NEGATIVE about this puzzle from Stick Insect by the end?!…
The preamble states that:
“The majority of clues contain an extra word which must be removed before solving. These words give all the NEGATIVES in a poem. Solvers must delete six cells to thematically represent the poem’s title and final word, leaving all real words in the grid (ignoring gaps). Chambers Dictionary (2016) is recommended; 23 is in SOED.”
There are 46 clues, so presumably that means at least 24 missing words…nothing to do but to get solving and to try and find some of them…
And they gradually started appearing – SUN in 7A; MOON in 12A; DAWN at 20A – so far so good – something to do with phases of the day? But then PROPER at 28A – a bit adjectival, after those simple nouns! And OF at 31A – a bit prepositional…
Towards the end I was getting BIRDS, BEES, FLOWERS and FRUITS, so it all became a bit rural and maybe seasonal? I had resisted the temptation so far to just stick a load of those words into a search engine, but in the end I had to succumb, and came up with the wonderful (if a bit depressing) poem ‘November‘, by Thomas Hood:
November by Thomas Hood
No sun — no moon!
No morn — no noon —
No dawn — no dusk — no proper time of day.
No warmth, no cheerfulness, no healthful ease,
No comfortable feel in any member —
No shade, no shine, no butterflies, no bees,
No fruits, no flowers, no leaves, no birds! —
November!
(This poem is in the public domain)
So the NEGATIVES of the title become clear – the removed words are all things from the poem that supposedly don’t happen in November, or at least as enjoyably or profusely as in the previous few months of the year! And, remembering one of the cardinal rules of EV solving, to always check the main diagonals, there was ‘VEMBER’ down the leading diagonal, and removing it – NO VEMBER – left real words:
I didn’t notice (mainly due to the messy state of my working copy!) until I came to write up the blog that the words/phrases are not only in the same order as in the poem, they are all separated/punctuated by a ‘normal’ clue – nice touch, and one which much have added a layer of complexity to the clueing?
Fairly above-average toughness for an EV, IMHO, with all that going on, and quite a challenge – with some new/obscure (to me) words – EVOVAE; HOUT; ONEYER; AGENE; RIVA…to name a few. NGULTRUM and HWYLS were vaguely familiar from recent appearances in other puzzles I have done. I guess more learned and erudite solvers than myself might have been familiar with the poem and, having spotted the cadence/ordering of the words, might have got there straight away?…
Anyway, my thanks to Stick Insect for an educational and challenging solve – I will try to get through the rest of November without too many negative thoughts – and I trust all is clear below.
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Clue No | No… | Solution | Clue (definition underlined, extra word in bold)
Logic/Parsing |
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1 | STROP | Criticism of strong work (5)
STR (strong) + OP (opus, music, work) [second definition for ‘strop’ in Chambers] |
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7 | SUN | DSOMO | Sun award second for cross female (5)
DSO (Distinguished Service Order, award/honour) + MO (second, moment) [female of a dso, hybrid cattle] |
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11 | CHOREES | Unpleasant job, cleaning out enormous feet (7)
CHORE (unpleasant job) + ES (EnormouS, cleaned out – of inner letters) [choree being a trochee, or a foot of two syllables in poetry] |
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12 | MOON | ULEX | Gorse and rubber by moon (4)
ULE (rubber) + X (times, by) |
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14 | ARGO | Goods twenty per cent lighter in mythical ship (4)
( |
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15 | MORN | STOP | Conclude morn is best (4)
S (contraction of is) + TOP (best) |
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16 | LOUVRE / LOURE | Confused lover embraces suitor’s second opening (6)
LO_VRE (anag, i.e. confused, of LOVER) around (embracing) U (second letter of sUitor) [loure being French for an old slow dance (to bagpipes?!)] |
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17 | NOON | ONEYER | About noon the old lie for great one, perhaps (6)
ONE_R (lie) around YE (the, old) [Shakespeare – ‘…great oneyers…’, or great ones] |
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18 | AGENE / AGEN | Whitener accepted with embarrassment (5)
A (accepted) + GENE (embarrassment) [nitrogen trichloride, formerly widely used as a whitening agent in flour] |
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20 | DAWN | ECARTES | Dawn creates bizarre card games (7)
anag, i.e. bizarre, of CREATES |
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21 | DODGEM / DODGE | Car at fair clip previously starts to get engine moving (6)
DOD (archaic, hence previously, for to clip hair) + GEM (starting letters of ‘Get Engine Moving’) |
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23 | DUSK | SEA OAK | Bathe around each dusk in seaweed (6, two words)
S_OAK (bathe) around EA (each) |
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25 | EPAULE | Apostle buttressed by Early English military support (6)
E_E (Early English) around (buttressed by) PAUL (one of the Apostles) [military – the shoulder of a bastion] |
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28 | PROPER | BADMAN / ADMAN | British publicist, proper outlaw (6)
B (British) + ADMAN (publicist) |
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30 | TIME | HELLUVA | Have lull, almost loose in very informal time (7)
anag, i.e. loose, of almost all of HAVE LUL( |
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31 | OF | EDUCE / DUCE | Develop education of universal church (5)
ED (Education) + U (universal) + CE (Church of England) |
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32 | DAY | WHATSO | Wife puts a lid on opening of day outing, of whatever kind, for historian (6)
W (wife) + HATS (puts a lid on) + O (opening letter of Outing) [archaic, so for a historian, for ‘of whatever kind’] |
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34 | NARRAS / NARAS | For lain, taste overflowed when knocking back fruit (6)
SAR (Scottish, hence Iain, as a stereotypical Scottis name, for savour, or taset) + RAN (overflowed) = SARRAN; all knocked back to give NARRAS [both variations of a SW African melon-like fruit] |
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36 | WARMTH | RIVA | Shetland’s opening warmth found in arrival (4)
hidden word in, i.e. found in. ‘arRIVAl’ [Shetland – cleft in rock] |
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37 | ERRS | Terrorist regularly goes wrong (4)
regular letters of ‘tErRoRiSt’ |
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38 | CHEERFULNESS | LUAU | Feast of cheerfulness likely under all Utopians initially (4)
initial letters of ‘Likely Under All Utopians’ [Hawaiian feast, or party] |
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39 | ANELACE | One Scottish fabric cutter, formerly (7)
ANE (Scottish, one) + LACE (fabric) [archaic – short two-edged dagger] |
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40 | HEALTHFUL | STIME | Special period for healthful particle in Islay (5)
S (special) + TIME (period) [Scottish, hence in Islay, for a tiny amount, or a particle] |
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41 | EASE | SAYST | Speak of old ease and waits, delaying time (5)
S( [archaic, or old, for speak] |
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Clue No | No… | Solution | Clue (definition underlined, extra word in bold)
Logic/Parsing |
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1 | SCALADE | Weigh up involving Bill in breaching of walls (7)
SCAL_E (weigh up) around (involving) AD (advertisement, bill) |
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2 | COMFORTABLE | THRO | By way of the mostly comfortable road’s northern half (4)
TH( |
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3 | FEEL | ROGUED | Feel cheated when gourde changed (6)
anag, i.e. changed, of GOURDE |
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4 | IN | PEARE / PEAR | Ed’s equal portion of hope in a reprieve (5)
hidden word in, i.e. portion of, ‘hoPE (IN) A REprieve’ [Spenserian variation on ‘peer’] |
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5 | ANY | BESEEM / BESEE | Be worthy of society, entering any meeting space (6)
BE_E (meeting, e.g. spelling bee) entered by S (society), plus EM (space, printing) |
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6 | MEMBER | ESTOCS | English member rebuffed taxes and swords (6)
E (English) + STOCS (scots, or taxes, reversed, or rebuffed) |
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7 | DIONAEA | Insect eater an aide cultivated to capture oxygen (7)
DI_NAEA (anag, i.e. cultivated, of AN AIDE) around (capturing) O (oxygen) [the Venus flytrap – insect eater!] |
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8 | SHADE | SUPERADD | Marvellous commercial director put on extra shade (8)
SUPER (marvellous) + AD (advertisement, commercial) + D (director) [to add over and above] |
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9 | MERE | Pool club, nothing better (4)
triple defn. – a MERE can be a pool; or a war club; and MERE can mean nothing better |
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10 | SHINE | OXERS | Shine fences for showjumpers, taking lead from dogs (5)
( |
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13 | LAY TO | Philosopher, not quiet about yen to bring vessel to rest (5, two words)
( |
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19 | BUTTERFLIES | NGULTRUM | No good ultimately, strange butterflies and rhino in Bhutan (8)
NG (no good) + ULT (ultimately) + RIM (strange) [rhino – archaic slang for money] |
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22 | ELUSIVE | Difficult to find use with live broadcast (7)
anag, i.e. broadcast, of USE + LIVE |
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24 | BEES | KNESSET | Parliament being for old bees in difficulty (7)
KN( |
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26 | ALAPA | Fold in rock introductory section (5)
A_A (volcanic rock) around LAP (fold) [introductory section of a raga, in Indian music] |
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27 | FRUITS | EVOVAE | Adam’s mate describes eggs, fruits in sequence of notes (6)
EV_E (Adam’s biblical mate) around (describing) OVA (eggs) [a ‘Gregorian cadence’] |
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28 | BANANA / ANANA | Fruit in equal quantities after prohibition (6)
BAN (prohibition) + ANA (from recipes, ‘in equal quantities’) |
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29 | FLOWERS | MURRAY | June’s predecessor eats primitive river flowers and eel (6)
M_AY (June’s predecessor, in the calendar) around (eating) UR (prefix – primitive, original) + R (river) |
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30 | HWYLS | Why cast less heartless divine inspirations? (5)
HWY (anag, i.e. cast, of WHY) + L( [Welsh – divine inspiration/emotional fervour] |
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31 | LEAVES | EAVES / AVES | Tea leaves vessel holds within projecting structure (5)
hidden word in, i.e. held by, ‘tEA ( |
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33 | HOUT | Hawk’s beginning, loudly and clearly, to sound like owl (4)
H (beginning of Hawk) + OUT (loudly and clearly) [variation on ‘hoot’] |
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35 | BIRDS | ARCS | A Catholic saint discharges birds (4)
A + RC (Roman Catholic) + S (saint) |
There’s a setter’s blog for this crossword here:
https://bigdave44.com/2024/11/14/ev1667-setters-blog/#more-207182
Thanks, crypticsue – you beat me to it!